The Birds - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Birds - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Darkness greets the world
Humans counteract with force
Yet I see the birds
Singing and sweetly tweeting
Despite food is hard to find.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

Yet I see the birds Singing and sweetly tweeting

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

part1 / Our beloved poet is very supportive of nature and sees all things as they are there unchanged if the evils of human beings are get away from them, here the bird and its sweet voice is a symbol of nature including creatures,

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

part 2/ and represents the power of good in the universe, well done our delicate poet for this master piece

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Birds are a symbol of cheerfulness. When the world is immersing in darkness birds keep themselves happy forgetting to get to the next meal. Quite fabulous dear RMJ

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2021

We ought to take learnings from birds, they are always thankful despite they are hungry.. Most refreshening this morn. Thank you dear great Poetess.

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Isadora Quagmire 15 September 2025

Such a beautiful piece! ! ! Loved re-reading it! Thanks for sharing this : )

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Isadora Quagmire 03 June 2025

Thank you for sharing this very sweet and lovely poem, you really do capture the innocence of these small creatures of creation : )

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Rob Lamberton 05 February 2023

To rejoice always, like a bird!

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Nabakishore Dash 03 June 2022

what a magnificent poem? ?

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Rebecca Navarre 18 October 2021

Very insightful! .. Such beauty in these birdies hearts! .. Despite- food is hard to find! .. Such beautiful soul written into this! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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