The Bridge Over The River Deep Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Bridge Over The River Deep

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Far away smoke rises from a cigar
And old ferryman waits from dawn to dusk.
But nobody peeps and they use the new bridge secretly.
Once in a blue Moon a poor soul comes to join the ferry
But he crossed only once and never seen him again.
One day he dreamed the old customers in a hurry
And the bridge has collapsed.
But he could not wake up and the ferry drifted away.

*On this mysterious pilgrimage in between the sky and earth, cries and wails of poor pilgrims.But the sky is far away....................................!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 25 June 2009

This is a fascinating poem about life and death and once upon a time. No matter how many new bridges we build, ultimately the ferryman must ultimately accompany us on our final journey. You share a bitter/sweet soul in this one Nimal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 23 June 2009

A superb metaphorical write. The river of no return. Death, the great intangible. Haunting, in its loveliness.Chilling in its implications.10/10. Fond regards, Sandra

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James Mclain 23 June 2009

Forever do I wait. The smoke of my cigar drives the ferry into the moon, on a river of blue smoke. while I wait to pick you up under the bridge.. There are no return trips...iip

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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