Stephen Katona

Silver Star - 3,374 Points (26th November 1970 / Manchester, UK)

The Broken Hearted - Poem by Stephen Katona

Then in a clearing those broken hearted met,
So full they all seemed of regret.
They looked each other in the eye,
Life had made them want to die,
Tears showed they could understand,
As they took each other by the hand.
At first it seemed to take a while,
Then the first face began to smile.

Topic(s) of this poem: depression


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A continuation of Lora Colon's 'Forest of the Damned'.

Comments about The Broken Hearted by Stephen Katona

  • Charlie Banks (9/7/2015 5:35:00 AM)


    The hope only the heart can fathom and the love only a smile can portray! ! It's hope and love that embraced in the holding of hands and crossed over to more happier lands... xxx ChB (Report) Reply

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  • (8/1/2015 12:06:00 PM)


    Beautiful expression of unexpected hope. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (4/3/2015 7:55:00 AM)


    Wow' Stephan it reminds me one our bengaly proverbs shesh theke shuru means a beginning from the end.
    Well said.
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  • Valsa George (3/29/2015 11:41:00 AM)


    Smile is infectious! Now the smile will pass from face to face.....! The knowledge that there are people who understand us itself will alleviate our pain! A cute little write, Stephen! (Report) Reply

  • (3/26/2015 11:50:00 AM)


    My poem did seem unfinished, and this is a perfect ending to it - a happy ending. Everyone loves a happy ending. Of course, now I'll expect you to provide a happy ending for all my poems, ha. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/26/2015 11:11:00 AM)


    A thought provoking write beautifully written, a smile gives you hope to go that extra mile! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (3/25/2015 8:21:00 PM)


    Amazing what a smile can do. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.
    Peace
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 25, 2015



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