Consider not it a meek sound,
This tick tucks tick tuck of the clock,
They, on your precious life,
Are strokes of deadly hammer.
A great poem, when we watch the clock, we watch our life tick away.
beutifully told, the truth of life..which tickles day by day, slow and steady...
The thought sent shivers through me.Even though it's a thing everyone knows. the chosen words intensify the idea, making it seem deadly. And that's where the greatness of a poet lies. Great poem.
time stews all... great thought..well expressed.. read my poem KAAL, too
Definitely. It haunts n warns us of the precious time v r wasting each day. Its not just a sound.. Its a deadly sound... Or say a warning signal.. Nice one. Wel done.
oh! sir you always have way with your words...incredible write indeed true and full of thoughts thank you for sharing love payal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice poem! I liked it's depth thought it's short.. and musical too.