The Crash (For My Best Frined, Dominic) Poem by Tiffany Wolf

The Crash (For My Best Frined, Dominic)

Rating: 5.0


Crash went the car,
Smash went the pole,
That day the wind,
It was knee buckling cold.
You were on your way,
To go 'Whee! ' with the sled,
Something went wrong,
And the squeal of the car put you in your eternal bed.
If I would've heard the click of the belt,
Who knows what I would've felt.
I don't know if you made shrilling screams,
But i do know I hear your sweet heavenly voice everynight in my dreams
I wish I could've yelled to warn you,
So that we culd be together, just us two.
I saw you lay there without a sound,
Now you're no longer going to come around.
Rip went your pale delicate skin,
Now you're laying in a white wooden coffin.
Maybe someday I will again get to see your perfect face,
And meet again in an angelic heavenly space.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

tiff. this si so sweet. you would meet him again..

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Wow this is a very sad poem... but u used good grammer and spelling.... but its still sad....

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Dark Gurl 55 21 January 2009

ohh soo sad poem.. buh good job..

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Rivers O'Donahue 20 January 2009

Very sad... I'm so so sorry to here that... I know what it's like to loose a best friend... For me it followed with a bunch of dark days and cold heartless nights.... I hope this doesn't get you down.... I hope you one day get to be with your friend again....

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