Tiffany Wolf

The Crash (For My Best Frined, Dominic)

Crash went the car,
Smash went the pole,
That day the wind,
It was knee buckling cold.
You were on your way,
To go 'Whee! ' with the sled,
Something went wrong,
And the squeal of the car put you in your eternal bed.
If I would've heard the click of the belt,
Who knows what I would've felt.
I don't know if you made shrilling screams,
But i do know I hear your sweet heavenly voice everynight in my dreams
I wish I could've yelled to warn you,
So that we culd be together, just us two.
I saw you lay there without a sound,
Now you're no longer going to come around.
Rip went your pale delicate skin,
Now you're laying in a white wooden coffin.
Maybe someday I will again get to see your perfect face,
And meet again in an angelic heavenly space.......

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 20, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, September 18, 2010

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/12/2009 1:15:00 AM)

    tiff. this si so sweet. you would meet him again..

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  • Cloud Strife (1/22/2009 3:50:00 PM)

    Wow this is a very sad poem...
    but u used good grammer and spelling....
    but its still sad....

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  • Dark Gurl 55 (1/21/2009 12:51:00 AM)

    ohh soo sad poem..
    buh good job..

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  • Tyler Dee (1/20/2009 9:44:00 PM)

    I never lost a best friend but my friend jake was shot and i didnt know him reel well but everyone i kno did and i feel their pain, plus when i lost my father i changed into wut i am now...idk if its good or bad but i do kno it has lead me into plenty of crazy adventures with friends, so i can never say my dad's death was in vein. but i kno how you feel it hurts like hell, you feel trapped? like you wish you could do something and you take a lil thing that could've made very little dif and blame yourself for the death. saying that little thing couldve changed everything. Great poem a reel jaw dropper

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  • Rivers O'Donahue (1/20/2009 6:48:00 PM)

    Very sad... I'm so so sorry to here that... I know what it's like to loose a best friend... For me it followed with a bunch of dark days and cold heartless nights.... I hope this doesn't get you down.... I hope you one day get to be with your friend again....

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