The Daring Move... Poem by Varsha M

The Daring Move...

Rating: 5.0


I remember the first day
When our honeymoon hour finally
Turned into fighting, greatly
Shattering me complete, as why
He turned me down, despite the enjoy

For days together consoling, soul bittery
Heart never ready to accept, hostility
Only trusting its very love truly
Clinging to love's positivity
She hoped reunion again someday.

Amidst all doubt and fear abundantly
Choosing to trust love boldly
And expecting to win back emotionally
Deepening bonds that are vividly
Starred to shine brilliantly

That was the feel of waiting deligently
For a love I nurtured cordially
Working miracles permanently
As seed of love roots firmly
Transcending us completely.

Sunday, December 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love and dreams,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
At times trusting love become the challenging work but if love is true you'll really find it else it's only fake bussiness of superficial love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 February 2021

Its only true love that is blissful. All else brings bitterness and remorse. A poem so beautifully crafted, dear Varsha.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2021

Very true. Misunderstandings, fights and little tussles are part and parcel of this life but with love everything vanishes and what remains in the end is LOVE. Nice that you overcame all obstacles to find and believe in true love.5***

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 December 2020

A well penned poem... Truly splendid...5 stars *****

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