The Day Breaks In The East Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

The Day Breaks In The East

Rating: 5.0


The day breaks in the east
The thin ray of light passes
Though the wall of cold mist

I wake up to a lilting sound
Of anklets and bangles as you
Place your feet on the ground

The bees appear one by one
To hover over opening buds as
The lone star dies on the horizon

From swinging nesst in fronds
Birds rush away towards the sky
Across fields, rivers and ponds

Peace and love float in the air
As smoke rises from the roofs
And the priest chants a prayer

The day breaks in the east
All seem to have dressed nice
As if partaking in a grand feast

Tuesday, May 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 May 2018

Peace and love float in the air As smoke rises from the roofs And the priest chants a prayer.........haunting expression with nice theme. This is really a brilliant poem with nice inscription on day breaks. Thanks for sharing.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 May 2018

Thanks for wonderful comment Sir and full rating. Regards.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 May 2018

This is a beautiful poem replete with imagery! My favorite lines: The bees appear one by one/To hover over opening buds as/The lone star dies on the horizon.....! Appreciated the way you have expressed the day break! (10)

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 May 2018

Thanks very much Sir. Your positive comments always inspired me to write. My heartfelt gratitude.

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