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when did madness of my eyes
melted to a quiver …. fell off my lips

when did your longing
draped a shroud and escaped…. a gasp

when did hope part
and entered your lungs a deep drag

when did lust for your lips
got coiled onto some commercial legs

when did the wind from your hair
offloaded my breath

when did your fingers left castle of my hold
and found new brick and mortar

when did I cease to exist
and became errata a disclaimer in every syllable

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kasia Fedyk 24 May 2012

You are very welcome! Beautifully written in one breath, profound expression. Thank you!

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rago rago 21 July 2009

what to comment........ when did I cease to exist........... wonderful write....

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Yelena M. 13 July 2009

...when did I cease to exist and became errata a disclaimer in every syllable.... My goodness, this is such a Strong expression...like the rest of your lines actually.10++ Thanks for sharing. A.

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Aamnah Akhtar 10 July 2009

the places spin, the faces merge, the walls divide, the world gets interiorized...

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