when did madness of my eyes
melted to a quiver …. fell off my lips
when did your longing
draped a shroud and escaped…. a gasp
when did hope part
and entered your lungs a deep drag
when did lust for your lips
got coiled onto some commercial legs
when did the wind from your hair
offloaded my breath
when did your fingers left castle of my hold
and found new brick and mortar
when did I cease to exist
and became errata a disclaimer in every syllable
what to comment........ when did I cease to exist........... wonderful write....
...when did I cease to exist and became errata a disclaimer in every syllable.... My goodness, this is such a Strong expression...like the rest of your lines actually.10++ Thanks for sharing. A.
the places spin, the faces merge, the walls divide, the world gets interiorized...
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I would like to translate this poem
You are very welcome! Beautifully written in one breath, profound expression. Thank you!