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The Days Without You

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I often see a tree, a butterfly,
I see the childrens laugh...
and think of you.

The way you look at me,
The way you make me feel,
...The days with you.

Where are you now?
Where is my shining sun?

My king, my lord...
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Natalie Carrier 25 February 2009

omgosh i really like your poem. It reminds me of this guy i really like and how i feel when im not around him. I hope you keep writing good peoms like this one

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Shihabudheen K J 29 September 2011

nice, read my poems and make cments

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Afzal Shauq 02 October 2009

Oh, the way you look at me... That way you made me feel... and now...The days without you... hmm so romantic and lovely poem with heartfelt feelings and faith on love..well constructed and the idea is good and soul touching one..reallly a good poem

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 April 2009

straight to my favourites, brilliantly strong and heartfelt, well done

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Sameer Ahmed 09 April 2009

The feeling of missing someone you love the most has been put in this poem very profoundly..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 April 2009

The missing is put beautifully and the incompleteness itself stands for the mesaage! Its nice Kali!

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