The Deed Poem by Pallavi Tripathi

The Deed

Rating: 5.0


We're taking ourselves to be above God
Making the same mistake brother, now nod
Lucifer made and look what a mess
We've created of nature with great success

We are at war with nature
Climate change just being a symptom, 'traitor! '
Of an incurable disease called ego
Like Trump many don't acknowledge, 'he go! '

If we don't change our ways
The days of extinction
Lay just ahead, won't stop blaze
Coming from wrath of God. It's no fiction

He put Lucifer to his place
Are we ready for trying days?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2023

We have become very insensitive towards our surroundings and in for more and more we are destroying the nature and its very fabric. A thoughtful poem, indeed. Full *****

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M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2023

In our greed to have more and more we are destroying the nature. A very thoughtful poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 April 2023

Beautiful poem for Holy Week Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 April 2023

Fascinating poem, I wish you a PalmSunday today and 5 Stars for these honest words

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