Twaiku 3 Poem by Pallavi Tripathi

Syllable 6-6-8 Not an Haiku but nice short poem.

An extraordinary haiku. Contains a sea of messages in this tiny capsule. Brevity at its best…

Wow....when one seeks peace, and yet cannot find it. This is an absolutely brilliant verse.

Don't worry about it it was good Bravo! ! !

'Twaiku' is an intriguing word of your own coinage. Perhaps it is because you write haiku like this for Twitter, or perhaps because you put a 'twist' on the usual approach to writing haiku..

out of the frying pan into the fire

Too true! !

The reality is that it's a dream of a poem, Pallavi!

This is fantastic short work......