The Deep Sea Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Deep Sea

Rating: 5.0


Enormous dreams as ghosts on horizon
soul in troubled waters
without the sails and a broken rudder.
New Moon guides with twinkling stars.
a Mermaid's song en route the passage
and gives strength to survive.
Lighthouse is unlit
and the Love country is not visible yet.

Saturday, November 5, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: ghosts,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 14 July 2006

This is stunning and guess what nimal I can see your light on our horizon your there See? This is beautiful and so worth the read Love duncan x

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Joe Breunig 25 June 2006

A beautiful and haunting piece; it's no wonder that men fall in love with the sea.

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Leigh A. Hill 20 May 2006

this is just beautiful! paints a perfect mellow picture in my mind with each stroke of words. love starr

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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