Finally the sun
Was spotted loving and sleeping
In the lap of moon
Many many thanks........Rajnishji..........I am humbled
Many many thanks........Juan-austin...........I am humbled
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like this, deepak! pleasant, tender. i need to do this myself and go back through my postings, i.e., recategorize some of what i called haiku to senryu. haiku, technically speaking, has a reference in the first line that anchors it in a particular season. when not there, but in the same form as this poem of yours, it's senryu. -glen