The Encounter Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Encounter

Rating: 4.8


We had known each other for some time,
Exchanged glances, words, maybe a rhyme,
Our hands had touched and nothing else,
But when I saw You, I was blessed.

Yet separation came too soon!
You chose the Earth and I the Moon,
Never again our paths did cross,
And you became my Albatross,
My one and only, greatest loss

Wednesday, January 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,rhyme,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 15 January 2014

Ah, the one that got away. We all have one secretly hid in our heart. Read mine - Last Rung on Your Ladder - Adeline You get the point, I couch my answers in poetry

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Roseann Shawiak 09 January 2014

Sad but beautiful sentiment of loss. Love it. RoseAnn

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Khairul Ahsan 09 January 2014

It's a nice, complete poem, written in just nine lines. 'You chose the Earth and I the Moon, , ' -Is a wonderful expression. Liked it very much. 'And you became my Albatross, ' -Is another wonderful expression. An albatross can be both an omen of good or bad luck, as well as a metaphor for a burden to be carried as penance. I guess you meant the latter.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 January 2014

loss of love is really sad.liked it.

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