Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

The Expression Of Love - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

The very first dropp of rain
Makes my heart go insane
Fragrance of the earth's aroma
Enraptures and fills my body's stoma
Ballet of leaves on songs of winds
Makes my soul dance and sings
Sun's penultimate rays glistening the twilight
Spreading heart's sight far n wide
Rainbow within each dewdrop
Helps appreciating versatility of life's job
If I combine all realms of nature
The only person whom i feature
Whose presence makes me alive
Who propels me to strive
Who makes me fly high and above
O my heart it's u
.....Embrace me with Your love, your love and your love

Comments about The Expression Of Love by Freespirit Juneja

  • Kasia Fedyk (6/5/2012 2:30:00 PM)

    Yes so true, when love speaks the music we here is exquisite and the expression profound. I can feel the oneness in your poem the beauty of life and power of love. Beautiful. love love love! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (6/1/2012 7:11:00 AM)

    Fine poem. Congratulation.
    I invite you to read my poem and comment.
    Gajanan Mishra
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  • Jinal Oswal (4/26/2012 8:36:00 AM)

    Absolutely lovely... I loves this poem... beautiful description of nature... A lovely write :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2012 6:19:00 PM)

    I agree with Steven Cooke on that you shouldn't abbreviate words. Other than that this is a mmoving and heartfelt poem that I adore, bravo! (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    Very moving poem indeed i congratulate you for such writing, , , , , , , , good expression of love good imagination good choice of words excellent poem i like it
    good luck wth your next poems
    Guess Who
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  • (4/19/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    i like this poem.The line make my heart go insane is cliche and I would change. I would also refrain from abreviations such as n wide when you mean and wide. U when you mean you. Good english makes good poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/18/2012 11:05:00 AM)

    Sweet write...thanks for inviting to read this
    the title was good and i am gonna think something
    i want try to write it as my own

    This love
    Exist unseen but real
    Comes to you without noticed
    like a wind to touch clothes
    we dance in the air
    Flagging our love
    Because of you we now shared
    because without you this love still unseen
    now everything showing all
    A flag of love
    swimming in the air
    Prove to all my love is real
    Exist but unseen
    If only the really can see and feel

    it was a rough and raw write but i just try do it instantly
    please dont compare to your nice poetry...yours just well done! _Unwritten Soul
    (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (4/18/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    Summer rain is a bliss to enjoy indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/14/2012 10:10:00 AM)

    Good imagery.Very nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2012 8:04:00 AM)

    Its really wonderful! ! ! ! If i combine all realms of nature, The only person whom i feature......... I could actually sense the presence.... just awesome.. keep it up (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2012 7:52:00 AM)

    its very sweet i like it (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2012 11:36:00 AM)

    cool, really awesome check out some of mine and honestly let me know what you think, been writing for a year now... (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2012 3:20:00 PM)

    I think its beautiful but you are overusing the art of 'rhyme' in your work, try to mix words a little, twist the english, you know in poetry senteces don't have to be in gramatical order, use other style like symbolism too, n your work will be exemplary (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    I find it no less than awesome. Moreover, I'm short of words to express my feelings over it. Dil jeet lia apne. (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2012 6:25:00 AM)

    Now this is more like it. I can't stop missing you has the structure, but this has the beat. It has the sound, and it has the soul. It is brilliant, so fast and rhythmic, with flying colours shouting love and spirit. i love it, I think it is a work of art (Report) Reply

  • Jacques S Mateya (4/7/2012 8:33:00 AM)

    beautiful piece! keep them coming (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2012 7:03:00 AM)

    the perfect proposal (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2012 7:03:00 AM)

    The perfect proposal (Report) Reply

  • (3/21/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful poem. You illustrate a beautiful picture. Nice words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 26, 2012

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