Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

The Fantasy Land - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

The Fantasy Land

Sweeping away all the griefs
Turning everyone as heart's thief
Learning ways to dampen the cries
Tying tongues telling the lies
Crossing hills and desert sands
I'm flying towards the fantasy land

Far away from life's gyre
Where love is soul of zephyr
Where only happiness flows
No animosity and no more foes
Simple life becomes so grand
Yes, I have landed in the fantasy land

World here is a benevolent ocean
Everything is in Brownian motion
Freespirits are the sole residents
Everyone is his own president
All compile a beautiful band
Yes, I'm living in the fantasy land

No brutality and no hidden lies
Honesty and truth here drives
Heart sings here merry songs
Even sinners dupe their wrongs
Everyone joins hand to hand
It's the beauty of the fantasy land

Freespirit Juneja

Topic(s) of this poem: Unity

Poet's Notes about The Poem

It's about a dream of every individual who wants the world to be a heaven.

Comments about The Fantasy Land by Freespirit Juneja

  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/21/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    Freespirits are the sole residents
    Everyone is his own president! !

    a poem which longs to wish seeing a pure world! ! this song is wonderful;
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  • (4/25/2012 12:56:00 PM)

    wow! yours poem is really nice and the poetic lines and rhyme scheme is also great (Report) Reply

  • Dhivya Thiyagarajan (4/24/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    really it is a nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    Magical Fantasy: -) Very well written Freespirit Juneja (Report) Reply

  • Shikha Shah (4/22/2012 11:28:00 AM)

    so thoughtful! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    a good poem.... wonderfully composed! (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2012 5:06:00 PM)

    I like the theme of this place you have created, humans living in harmony, well concieved and thought out. I have to agree with Valerie about the second verse. Good writing...... (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (4/15/2012 6:16:00 AM)

    Again, a nice poem - I think the second line of the second verse needs looking at, and I don`t know what `brownian motion` is. Otherwise, very good. (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    A really wonderful poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2012 8:48:00 AM)

    I would love to be in fantasy land...beautiful world described marvelously.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (4/14/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    A visit to Utopia!
    a true and positive poet's imagination does not need a passport-visa things for such a visit, and he does not visit alone, but by the technique of impressionism carries us along the world of the fever n the fret, it's a happy release though...the poem says aloud let's don't think about the dream-break....
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  • Neela Nath Das (4/14/2012 3:19:00 AM)

    Every tormented soul would like to visit that very land.A Utopia! Fantastic job with strong power of imagination! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/8/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    Is it a land on earth? it must be great place to visit, i wanna try brownian movement...hahaha joking,
    i wonder if the sky is not blue but different hue...and the tree can talk to bird and we see it around the house,
    fantasy land a new land to discover but that is only a land that placed in your mind...Bring it out here just a as a written one but give our mind a ticket to visit sometime :) keep writing! _Unwritten Soul
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  • (4/7/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    i want to be inthe fantasy land........................... (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (4/7/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    A very nice feel good factor to this piece that flows with good rhythm to maintain the sentiment of the poem. Good work (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2012 2:23:00 PM)

    good one dear..! ! keep it up (Report) Reply

  • David Gerardino (4/6/2012 2:20:00 PM)

    happens only in fantasy land, , , , , , , , , , , i can see the words, , , , , , , , , , very good. (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2012 6:59:00 AM)

    if only this fantasy land becomes real....i am nice it should be (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2015

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