Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Seed To A Latino Dancer (The Nurturing Of Young One In The Womb) - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Gold melts from the God's tomb
Only to be nurtured in mom's womb

Hola! a small world is in ecstasy
Everything turns as realistic fantasy
Stone hearted becomes flabby
When news spreads in the air
There's going to be a baby

Books and videos fear and run
To ponder them is sheer fun
Old views cast a reviving picture
Poor mom listens the lectures
Gulp them all even it's a tincture
Shopping list never cease to grow
Renaissance renaissance cries the home

From a seed to a Latino dancer
Baby enjoys and cherishes a lot
Causes the sadness to drought
He eats, dances and makes merry
For him everything is a fairy
But, she relishes the enamoring pain
Takes all the care
As nothing should go in vain

Two lives fight the fierce battle
The Ordeal gives her trembling jitters
Cast and recast his body's metal
Soon the cries embrace the smile
Never seen pain so labile
Enthralling in his beautiful presence
In a blink he creates new heaven

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Small world = Family...
Poor mom listens the lectures....from other people or from elderly
Gulp them all even it's a tincture... at times u don't wanna listen, but u stil listen
Soon the cries embrace the smile(baby is born)
Cast and recast....the shearing stress which the baby undergoes while coming out of the womb

Comments about Seed To A Latino Dancer (The Nurturing Of Young One In The Womb) by Freespirit Juneja

  • Kewayne Wadley (6/19/2015 6:21:00 AM)

    Good good poem. What I liked most was how you tackled real life as eloquently as you did here. Giving birth is a beautiful thing. A blessing. A story of truimphant porportion (Report) Reply

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  • Ghina Albiek (8/25/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    soon the cries embrace the smile..... wonderful i really enjoyed reading it especially this sentence :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2012 1:29:00 AM)

    Magnificent creation portraying alongside the joy that a baby brings along like a blossoming of crops bring showers of joy to the farmers soul but it has come from the untiring labour in summer and rain of him...The meeting of two thoughts have kept the flow going in a thoughtfull adventure...And as the other poems of yours the innovations in design can never go unnoticed... (Report) Reply

  • Roongratt Srimanchantha (6/13/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    wow..its really a nice poem. Cheers! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2012)

    Good Composition.... (Report) Reply

  • (6/11/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    young love has no fear that is what is so dear a dare that which is rare I don't care do it now...Oh..little amy is so where is the fathere? who cares..did you hsve fun...yes...and would do it again...young love has no fear that is so dear...a dare which is rare...not to said it all my any world...boy or girl... (Report) Reply

  • Jymiely Tamayo (6/11/2012 1:50:00 AM)

    well depicted piece of mother-child dilemma and triumph. and the title very unique. Congratulations :) (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/10/2012 4:29:00 PM)

    Childbirth always brings joy, which is captured in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2012 2:12:00 PM)

    i like the fact that you write about childbirth (that atleast is what i hope it is about) because it is a beautiful thing; life. although, pretty nasty and hard. good job (: (Report) Reply

  • Miss Darkness (6/10/2012 1:18:00 PM)

    really loved it nice job dear :)) keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Dhivya Thiyagarajan (6/10/2012 12:58:00 PM)

    Really nice poem.Good job (Report) Reply

  • Mark Trajano (6/10/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    I love how thoughts are stitched together. Written elegantly tragic in a way as it's a reality some face. (Report) Reply

  • Umaprosad Das (6/9/2012 10:39:00 PM)

    Dear Juneja, in your 'Seed to a Latino dancer'
    You depicted a real picture when a new born appears.
    'she relishes the enamoring pain'
    A mother relishes the agony for something to gain.
    Your entry is great,
    I wholeheartedly appreciate.
    (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/8/2012 2:04:00 AM)

    The dancer and her baby have to fight a fierce battle to survive.The last couplet is fantastic. A moving poem. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (6/7/2012 8:38:00 PM)

    This terrific and well crafted write is very appealing to me because it brings me memories when my daughter Sarah was born: what an emotional moment that I can never forget! Your talent and emotions came alive through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/6/2012 11:40:00 PM)

    Good poem. Everything is fairy. congratulation
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. kindly keep contact.
    Gajanan Mishra
    (Report) Reply

  • Scotty Dogg (6/6/2012 8:49:00 PM)

    I think the poem is terrific! Good job! S (Report) Reply

  • (6/6/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    It is such a blessing when a baby is born, the most happiest moments even in difficult times. Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/6/2012 10:17:00 AM)

    care is described with lot of care and like more evidently..! ! (Report) Reply

  • Wabi Sabi (6/6/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    it must be mysterious one, it is not my place to judge, however, since we share one language, English, I would like to share something mutual among us. sometimes it goes well without any mutual things only when it comes to be understood as time goes by. I would have to say this is a piece something like that.
    Anyway, I like it you put such energy for whatever you write, I really admire that.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 2, 2013

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