Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

I Love The Smiling You - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

I love the smiling you

I love the smiling you
Oh I love the smiling you
Ruffling my senses
Unguarded me from fences
Life has nothing for me in lieu
When I see the smiling you
As I love the smiling you

Emotions are tantalizing
Feelings are fraternizing
Surprises are getting surprised
All these I never surmise
When I see the smiling you
As I love the smiling you

I love the smiling you
Oh I love the smiling you
My pains are getting vexed
Now they're really stressed
Failures are getting redressed
Seek nothing but only success
I feel like a man born anew
When I see the smiling you
Oh I love the smiling you

Freespirit Juneja

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about I Love The Smiling You by Freespirit Juneja

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/12/2016 2:14:00 AM)

    I feel like a man born anew
    When I see the smiling you
    Oh I love the smiling, attraction, young age, infatuation............ smiling experience that remains portrayed in lovely words. thank you dear poet. tony
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/20/2015 5:16:00 AM)

    Smile! And let true love be seen on your face. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/7/2012 1:11:00 AM)

    you feel reborn on seeing your smiling love. (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sehgal (6/4/2012 5:17:00 AM)

    poem makes you smile! well done. (Report) Reply

  • Samra Haq (6/2/2012 5:36:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with beautiful title. I really enjoyed this poem. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • David Gerardino (5/5/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    Seeking for nothing but success, , , , makes the poem.........very good. (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2012 7:14:00 PM)

    This is a really good poem. you should keep up the good work and dont let anyone say ur not talented because u are very talented (Report) Reply

  • Thyris Taylor (4/27/2012 10:03:00 AM)

    Bravo, i really enjoyed this poem. Aint love grand. well done. (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2012 6:21:00 PM)

    Pretty. I do agree that nothing makes one feel happier than a warm smile. I love it :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2012 10:19:00 PM)

    All these I never surmise
    Swirling in the sounds
    Devised by the smiling you
    Oh I love the smiling you from the writer shared a a smile to another for all time a love maybe who knows
    that is what make the smile so wonderful it is unknown for what it is about to do to the one seeing...very good write...a new angle to the begining of a poosible love story..?
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  • (4/24/2012 4:56:00 PM)

    it is a good poem. will read others of yours (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2012 10:34:00 PM)

    beautiful poem i loved it (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    Another brilliant poem man, keep them coming...Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/18/2012 10:48:00 AM)

    I read this one before, that one was so good but after read a new version it be more's like there is connection to say I love the smiling you to readers mind...Keep smiling..anyone should because it is the best remedy of any hardness...and keep heart feel peace everywhere whenever see smiling people around...we all love the smiling face_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2012 3:19:00 PM)

    Lol...thats one of a great poem i seem to like it cause it basickly in the smiling her/him but any way great poem (Report) Reply

  • Parithi Muthurasan (4/16/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    My failures are getting redressed
    Seeking for nothing but success
    I feel like a man born anew
    When i see the smiling you--unforgettable lines, thanks, ..........parithi
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  • Shahzia Batool (4/13/2012 7:53:00 PM)

    A wonderful job poetry is! it highlights an in hand common subject in such a new style that it arrests the attention.i love the smiling you is one such model...centuries-old smile of the loved one is presented in a simple n beautiful style... (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (4/12/2012 10:34:00 AM)

    Yeah! ! ! I smile from a loved one can do wonders in this world.... Nice write! ! !
    Thank you for the invitation :)
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  • Samra Haq (4/8/2012 5:10:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Your rhyming and phrases has expressed your true love and emotions, desires and thoughts. That how much you are enthusiastic. Lovely lyrics. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2012 9:41:00 AM)

    The best line is a man born anew. In this beautifully penned poem it is like the cherry on the cake. Lovely. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2015

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