The Falcon Poem by Lee Geoghegan

The Falcon

Rating: 5.0


I can recall another lifetime, one where I could fly
Gazing down upon the earth, moonlight glinting in my eye
A king among the stars with a piercing call that could terrify
I was once a mighty falcon, a raptor of the sky

Soaring majestically brought exhilarating thrills
Cruising deep valleys and magnificent hills
Preparation for the hunt was how I honed my skills
The sweat and toil all worthwhile when the blood finally spills

I patiently stalked my prize below; death was now en route
My mind made up instantly, my focus absolute
Diving at breakneck speed was my key attribute
Blazing through the clouds, the Reaper's in hot pursuit

The thrill of the hunt, an innate yearning since ancient Babylon
My prey chirped sweet melodies until he was sprung upon
I clasped him tightly within my powerful talon
His life force was swiftly dispatched as his soul journeyed to Avalon

Moments after my car crash, I was overcome with visions so clear
Echoes of a life I lived before I ended up here
Memories flooded back, and down my cheek rolled a welcome tear
For this alternate existence, I once held so dear

A past life as a falcon engulfed my human brain
Vast skies were my territory, my conquered domain
I embraced the rasping wind and a deluge of torrential rain
This incredible revelation has numbed all my agonising pain

I was once quite different from the man that lies here now
I've awoken from this human dream, and I just can't comprehend how
Fortunately, my injuries are just too severe, so it's time to take a bow
As I long to return to those blue skies once more, that's my dying vow

The Falcon
Wednesday, February 1, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: landscapes,beauty,nature,sky,hunting,life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is the tale of a man who has suffered a severe accident, after his accident he has awoken in a hospital bed with the realisation that he has lived many previous lives, one of which was when he was a falcon, he lays motionless and broken in his bed as he reminisces of that life he cherished so much, and his heart begins to yearn for it once again.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

Great descriptive write! Full of thrilling imagery.

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Lee Geoghegan 02 February 2023

Thank you Nosheen, I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 February 2023

the poem has been crafted allegorically; nice to read

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Lee Geoghegan 02 February 2023

Thank you Mahtab.

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Rob Lamberton 01 February 2023

Great falcon imagery!

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Lee Geoghegan 02 February 2023

Cheers Rob.

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