The Few Who Did Not, Knew Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The Few Who Did Not, Knew



'...and when they decided to remain themselves.
Keeping things the same and expecting it.
Deeper into darkness they went.
Expecting gifts to quickly unwrap.
Becoming dissatisfied...
With a wish to give them back!
And not appreciating the one who gave them!
And that's a fact!

Very few attempted,
To expand from their limited restrictions.
And embrace the change they faced.
They believed for them this would be a waste of time.
And in time...
They did waste their minds.
And the few who did not...
Knew as they grew! '

~Grandpa...
That was 'not' a Christmas Story! ~

'You told me to tell you a 'story'.
You said nothing about Christmas!
And besides...
Grandpa does the best he can.
And I want you to realize that! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shyam Balaji 23 December 2008

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