The Fight. Poem by anju addanki

The Fight.

Rating: 5.0


It started last evening,
while it was raining,
And with all my might,
The best i tried,
To make things right.
Its one of those days,
And its life phase,
Life was like a halt,
Without anyones fault,
But then we thought,
For what we fought,
Is not right,
Thinking bright,
And with a try,
And not to cry,
We faced each other,
No talking either,
Our eyes met,
Then lips were set,
The love after the Fight,
Was just so Right.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mubeen Sadhika 07 October 2009

The love after the Fight, Was just so Right. Nice words. Beautifully expressed. deserves 10++++

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Luwi Habte 06 October 2009

anju... you are innocent, being lover and lovely after a fight God bless you luwi

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Ravi Sathasivam 05 October 2009

Beautiful poem. Well penned. Love become more close to each other after a fight. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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moribund love 26 September 2009

the value of love better known after a fight. nice poem.10+++

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