The Fire Poem by Adeola Babalola

The Fire

Rating: 5.0

Fire is good,
i tend to put my hands
and it burns.

Never start that fire,
if you do, many might be left orphaned.
Many more will starve.
And that woman there,
you might not see again.

Don't start it.
That i myself knows not,
what fate would give me.
Because, he has not choosen to be my friend sometimes.

So, when you choose for us,
watch it!
That you might not cause more harm than good.

Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

And what can a better way be than yours to elucidate Fire and kindle us readers

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Terence George Craddock 01 August 2011

Yes fire is good when it is used to warm people, cook food and benefit diverse cultures and civilizations. But your warning is succinct, 'That you might not cause more harm than good' as simplistic solutions and military interventions in Africa and throughout the world have repeatedly proven. The warm fire of love and peace is a better policy.

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Romeo Della Valle 23 July 2011

A very concerned citizen of the World! Your good human spirit is obvious in this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the world with your great talent! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Penko Simmons 23 July 2011

Please stop hat fire is very thoughtful because the fire is good but it destroys

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Seun Bewaji 22 July 2011

nice thought, and word of caution keep it up

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