The Fire Of Love Poem by Fay Slimm

The Fire Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Wordless he stutters, and meaningless, mutters
Crossed thoughts incoherently wrong.
Tonge-tied and spell-bound feeling his heart pound,
Sensations, familiar and strong.


Throat tight and burning, already the yearning
To flee from eyes passioned with flame.
Mouth dried and knees weak stumbling his steps seek
The lips which allure him again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivor Hogg 17 September 2008

A love lorn swain plucking up his courage to approach the object of his passion. I picture a potty acned youth enamoured of the class beauty

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Arabian Heart 09 August 2008

a fire that i know not physically but emotionally such a fiery substance you write with a flame a fire of passion please teach me more

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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