Dear Namz,
I don't know if you've noticed
And I don't know how best to say this, but
From time to time when i look at you
My mind wanders
To a place unknown
Just like a tyre blown...
The air rushes out
The tyre's flat and I don't know if it will even start
Now, before you came in I could walk around
Talk aloud and yes I could laugh out loud
But, when you came in I was like Lot's wife
When I turned around...
I froze
Maybe I should pay the price
Or maybe twice
Cause your presence makes me freeze
I cannot rise
To get the prize
Cause I froze...
What more could justify this cause.
Yours Admiringly,
Smiley.
© #MyConfessionalLetters
The First Letter - Smiley NTK Thefir5t
March 30th,2014.
Mind wanders to unknown place. An amazing letter is written poetically with care and love that expresses emotion...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Now, before you came in I could walk around Talk aloud and yes I could laugh out loud But, when you came in I was like Lot's wife When I turned around... I froze.....i really smiled reading your lines, verses..... you are very original in your thinking and presentation my dear poet. write more and give us to read. thank u. tony