The First Letter #mcl 1 Poem by Kondwelani Tembo Nguluwe

The First Letter #mcl 1

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Dear Namz,

I don't know if you've noticed
And I don't know how best to say this, but

From time to time when i look at you
My mind wanders
To a place unknown
Just like a tyre blown...

The air rushes out
The tyre's flat and I don't know if it will even start

Now, before you came in I could walk around
Talk aloud and yes I could laugh out loud
But, when you came in I was like Lot's wife
When I turned around...
I froze

Maybe I should pay the price
Or maybe twice
Cause your presence makes me freeze
I cannot rise
To get the prize

Cause I froze...
What more could justify this cause.

Yours Admiringly,
Smiley.

© #MyConfessionalLetters
The First Letter - Smiley NTK Thefir5t

March 30th,2014.

Monday, March 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,narrative,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2018

Now, before you came in I could walk around Talk aloud and yes I could laugh out loud But, when you came in I was like Lot's wife When I turned around... I froze.....i really smiled reading your lines, verses..... you are very original in your thinking and presentation my dear poet. write more and give us to read. thank u. tony

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Kondwelani Tembo Nguluwe 06 March 2018

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2018

Mind wanders to unknown place. An amazing letter is written poetically with care and love that expresses emotion...10

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