The Flute Of Loneliness-01: The Aftermath Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Flute Of Loneliness-01: The Aftermath

Rating: 5.0


Ever since you left,
The entire sky was full
With dumb and deaf,
Dull and lonely Stars!

The moment
The symphony of your voice
Fingered the strings
The rivers of the heart
Are over flooded,
The tides cease to return
Back to the ocean again.

The magic flute of thy lips
Filled the tunes
Blue and intimate,
Full and vertebrate,
Flooding the life with rainbows,
And symphony of the seven colours.

The Flute Of Loneliness-01: The Aftermath
Friday, April 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 29 April 2016

The magic flute of thy lips Filled the tunes Blue and intimate, Full and vertebrate, Flooding the life with rainbows, And symphony of the seven colours. I like this love poem. I want to know more about your lady love Sir. Good poem.10 for this one. Seema Devi

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Rimi, Thank you for these beautiful remarks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 May 2018

THE BEAUTY of poetry such as this is in itself a mark of symphony melodious as it is we even though deaf can hear with open eyes and sealed hearts tears wash away all our fears when we read poetry from our loved ones near and dear such as you my poet supreme where in the darkness of life haave you left me on a road as lonely and bereft of all lfe I thought in me was left

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Rajendra Rout 21 May 2018

The magic flute of thy lips Filled the tunes Blue and intimate, Full and vertebrate, Flooding the life with rainbows, And symphony of the seven colours. Lovely line and lovely picture I really enjoy this poem 💯+++++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 22 November 2017

Flooding the life with rainbows, And symphony of the seven colours. Wow.. simply beautiful, you have created a new world order of love. Thanks for the poem. 10+++ for the poem sir.

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Alina, Thank you for these beautiful remarks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2016

Love! ! With the magic flute of thy lips. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you Sir for the beautiful remarks. Sorry for the great delayed response.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 20 May 2016

The moment The symphony of your voice Fingered the strings The rivers of the heart Are over flooded, The tides cease to return Back to the ocean again. What a nice poem! Loved the lines, thanks for the poem. 10 marks it deserves. Sanjukta

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Sanjukta, Thank you for these beautiful remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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