The Freedom-Sky
Do not fly highly, do not fly, my birdie- tiny...
Only for big predators blossom heavens any...
And if you it is possible to manage harmlessly...
Heart will not sustain pleasure of freedom-sky...
In this concise, puzzle of a poem, the message is loud and clear - little birds should be wary of venturing too high - for fear of predators that rule the sky. Lovely message. Lovely poem. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
And if you it is possible to manage harmlessly... Heart will not sustain pleasure of freedom-sky... Fantastic observation with intellectual analysis of the caption. Hundred percent truth. Really astonishing! The little writing about freedom-sky ends with such wisdom! Beautiful hypothesis to project a crying-need of the human soul and society. Thank you for the boldness of uttering such truth with the fragrance of poetry. ....10/10 Regards, pranab
I loved this. Your cautions are well advised. Yet, I advise that the loins be girded for battle. Aren't we on the same page?
A charming write, if the bird flies too high the bigger predator will get him, unique and quite lovely, 10 Lynda xx
Enchanting and beautiful poem and I love the title. I like the philosophy of taking care and being aware of predators. Top marks...
In your fragility lies your greatest strength. Always fly, Tsira. Very touching. Love, SandraX
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Tsira, wonderful poem, loved the message within. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David