The Girl Beside Nile - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

have you seen the girl
beside river Nile?
raindrops on her feet,
i dont know who she is.

moistened with raindrops blue
is the field she walking through.
up in sky
sun peeps through
clouds of varied hue.

she walks on and on,
leaves are away blown.
by the winds,
far away..
she stays on. she had forgotten her way.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

i wrote this poem when i was in seventh standard.2010..! !

Comments about The Girl Beside Nile by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Unwritten Soul (6/24/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    Ah it sounds nice, you can make many new moves in poetry, this one just a big step...! ! greater in the future_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • (6/24/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    i love this poem
    so amazing
    and moving too
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  • (6/24/2013 4:38:00 AM)

    seventh standard./
    thats great
    wow..gud luck
    at that standard...i even cnt think anything like poetry
    great verse
    so touching
    you portryed the girl in a nice manner
    greatly written
    (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (6/24/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    nice image created
    nile river,
    you may use ganga
    or hoogly
    ha ha ha
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013

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