The Girl Beside Nile Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

The Girl Beside Nile



have you seen the girl
beside river Nile?
raindrops on her feet,
i dont know who she is.

moistened with raindrops blue
is the field she walking through.
up in sky
sun peeps through
clouds of varied hue.

she walks on and on,
leaves are away blown.
by the winds,
far away..
she stays on. she had forgotten her way.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote this poem when i was in seventh standard.2010..! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 June 2013

Ah it sounds nice, you can make many new moves in poetry, this one just a big step...! ! greater in the future_Soul

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~ Jenie~ 24 June 2013

i love this poem so amazing and moving too

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Survi Sharma 24 June 2013

seventh standard./ thats great wow..gud luck at that standard...i even cnt think anything like poetry great verse so touching you portryed the girl in a nice manner greatly written

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Vishal Sharma 24 June 2013

nice image created nile river, you may use ganga or hoogly ha ha ha

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