Rookie - 191 Points (07 august 1996 / samastipur)

Back To Me - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

its the ultimate day.
i haven't imagined that
our friendship will end this way.
you said 'its end'.
you said 'bye forever'
ohh friend..

i want to cry
but tears have dried up.
whats my fault? tell me why?

i believe in miracles,
i trust almighty.
one day i know
you will be back to me.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

for my once very close friend.
we are still friends but the charm is lost.
we had quarrel & not properly sorted out yet.

Comments about Back To Me by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Soulful Heart (3/3/2016 7:40:00 PM)

    plea, hope, perplexity all in one....nice n sweet....keep up (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/25/2015 3:30:00 AM)

    Love and pain! Very common in life; but, there is hope ahead. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (8/13/2015 5:31:00 AM)

    once the time was when i was helpless inside the skin of love thought i was above emotions carried happiness and the true friends went far off my eye balls it was the godamn love that snatched me my everything my time my rhyme my reason misunderstanding took then we parted then met then parted parted met parted met parted god knows what is the destiny (Report) Reply

  • Shania K. Younce (10/5/2013 4:06:00 PM)

    What a very pretty poem. You've caught my eye. Bien! Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2013 2:45:00 PM)

    You must know that problems are guidelines not stop signs, both of you. In life you sometimes fight with your loved ones, its natural and doesn't mean you don't love each other but pride is a problem and fools live a solitery lives because of pride, be wise and swallow your pride and sort things out with your dear friend.
    Nice poem.
    Siya_! !
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  • Tripsha Ghosh (7/4/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    Heart touching love it (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/1/2013 3:02:00 PM)

    sometimes friendship can end this way. return to yesterday is good (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    hope you get back the friend
    nice poetry
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  • (6/25/2013 1:20:00 PM)

    so sad to your friend
    do you patch up now dear
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  • Vishal Sharma (6/25/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    paining and longing i have felt over the poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2013 4:24:00 AM)

    Pains produce poems. Keep up your lovely write Jenie. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/25/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    I trust almighty, good poem, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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