its the ultimate day.
i haven't imagined that
our friendship will end this way.
you said 'its end'.
you said 'bye forever'
i want to cry
but tears have dried up.
whats my fault? tell me why?
i believe in miracles,
i trust almighty.
one day i know
you will be back to me.
hope you get back the friend nice poetry
so sad to your friend do you patch up now dear
paining and longing i have felt over the poem
Pains produce poems. Keep up your lovely write Jenie.
plea, hope, perplexity all in one....nice n sweet....keep up
Love and pain! Very common in life; but, there is hope ahead. Nice work.
What a very pretty poem. You've caught my eye. Bien! Well done.
You must know that problems are guidelines not stop signs, both of you. In life you sometimes fight with your loved ones, its natural and doesn't mean you don't love each other but pride is a problem and fools live a solitery lives because of pride, be wise and swallow your pride and sort things out with your dear friend. Nice poem. Siya_! !
Heart touching love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
sometimes friendship can end this way. return to yesterday is good