that i gave lovely glances
to you everyday.
that i talked to you
in a nice way.
i am responsible for your
i gave you pain,
your longing went in vain.
for being helpful
in every circumstance.
for valueing my glance.
not valued by others though.
for bearing my rudeness
which have hurt you.
for revenge you took,
by not giving me even a last look.
nice poem and gud to see your poems daily
i knw each and every line created here great
Heartfelt poem Jenie, enjoyed reading... Siya_! !
hi jenie very beautiful thanks for your nice feeling good luck
Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Jenie.
Thanks for being honest you made me understand; a beautiful drop i like it, thanks jenie.
your'e a good poet, , keep on writing
Sorry and Thank You, the three beautiful words so nicely used. A very straight forward and touching poem. Very much liked the comments of Don Nguyen and quite agree with him.
Thanks and Sorry are two words that we must use often, in this beautiful write i can say i give you claps..do write more_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
The person you wrote seem s like a sweet man who really cares for you. I dont think it was a revenge, his last look on you probably had pieved his heart as well. I hope Revenge is simply poetic expression and you didnt mean it. Your poem sounds so sweet and loving though, I love it.