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Sorry & Thank You - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

that i gave lovely glances
to you everyday.
that i talked to you
in a nice way.
i am responsible for your
i gave you pain,
your longing went in vain.

for being helpful
in every circumstance.
for valueing my glance.
not valued by others though.
for bearing my rudeness
which have hurt you.
for revenge you took,
by not giving me even a last look.

Comments about Sorry & Thank You by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Melikhaya Zagagana (8/26/2014 4:43:00 AM)

    Thanks for being honest you made me understand; a beautiful drop i like it, thanks jenie. (Report) Reply

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  • The Moody Blue (7/3/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    your'e a good poet, , keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/2/2013 10:18:00 PM)

    Sorry and Thank You, the three beautiful words so nicely used. A very straight forward and touching poem. Very much liked the comments of Don Nguyen and quite agree with him. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/28/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    Thanks and Sorry are two words that we must use often, in this beautiful write i can say i give you write more_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Tabandeh Heidary Bafghy (6/26/2013 11:43:00 AM)

    hi jenie
    very beautiful
    thanks for your nice feeling
    good luck
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  • (6/25/2013 1:19:00 PM)

    nice poem and gud to see your poems daily (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (6/25/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    i knw each and every line created here
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  • (6/25/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    Heartfelt poem Jenie, enjoyed reading...
    Siya_! !
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  • (6/25/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    The person you wrote seem s like a sweet man who really cares for you.
    I dont think it was a revenge, his last look on you probably had pieved his heart as well.
    I hope Revenge is simply poetic expression and you didnt mean it.
    Your poem sounds so sweet and loving though, I love it.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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