Neil Crosby

Rookie (December 10,1992 / Fort Knox, Kentucky)

The Game Of Life - Poem by Neil Crosby

Life is a game
Some strife for fortune and fame
Others struggle to get by
others live think life as nothing more than a sigh
One life to live, and be free
People don't tend to see
That life is how you chose
If you chose a bad path, you lose
in this game
Win or Lose

Comments about The Game Of Life by Neil Crosby

  • (12/26/2008 11:14:00 PM)

    Very True About Life Now A Days (Report) Reply

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  • (12/18/2008 7:20:00 AM)

    a matured write...admirable considering your young age...let us live the excitements of the present...well done, Neil...10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2008 7:36:00 AM)

    The game as a metaphor for life isn't that bad. Like in the game of chess those in power can make a pawn sacrifice whenever they feel like. The reason we keep on going is the hope to make it to the other end of the table and become a king, queen or a president. (Report) Reply

  • (9/27/2008 8:07:00 PM)

    life is not a game,
    it may be a nightmare full of pain but its not a game...
    if it was a game,
    then life would be shame...
    people and crying a child is always crying,
    but this is not a game,
    theres too much pain for life to be put into one game
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2008 1:03:00 PM)

    this is a really good poem as well...
    i love the game factor all though my game is nearly ended...
    you are so good...
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 12, 2008

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