When You See The Color Red Poem by Neil Crosby

When You See The Color Red



When you see the color red
Do you see me bloody and dead
When you see the color red
Do you picture me free of dread
What do you see
Do you see yourself hurting me
What do you see
Do you give a chance to be
When you see the color red
Did you see the rose dead
When you see the color red
Do you love me or am I just dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Demon lover 26 December 2008

Very Good Neil-kun....

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Naidz Ladia 21 December 2008

neil, dont make the color red dull...red is a dominant color, , , u must be happy and be happy, , dont be negative in ur life..red s a symbol of happiness..dont look at the negative side, , u mght be as red of RED..as red as the rose.. dont quit, cheers, , , , , i like ur poem..

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Original Unknown Girl 02 July 2008

I love the colour red but I never see the bad side of this colour. Like Viola says, red depicts passion. I guess this is a passionate write though... Keep writing. HG: -) xx

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Viola Grey 02 July 2008

passion is also depicted by the colour red...keep up the great work

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Neil Crosby

Neil Crosby

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