Neil Crosby

Rookie (December 10,1992 / Fort Knox, Kentucky)

Suicide Note - Poem by Neil Crosby

I live in a life of endless lies
Waiting for my demise
Twisted metal
A fallen petal
Blood falling like snow
Everyone will know
My end is near
Farewell my dear
Whether by a knife at my heart or throat
My suicide note


Comments about Suicide Note by Neil Crosby

  • (12/2/2009 3:55:00 PM)


    short but full of emotions! great poem! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Tyease Collins (2/7/2009 3:51:00 PM)


    It was short but i loved it. I loved the fallen petal.

    You are a really nice poet =]

    {my new inspiration}

    10/10
    -Tyease
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  • (12/26/2008 11:08:00 PM)


    Awesome and Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2008 1:57:00 AM)


    Awesome
    N dats all i have 2say bout dat
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  • (11/1/2008 9:31:00 PM)


    I really really like this poem

    specially the lines (twisted metal / a fallen petal)

    you have talent you can really feel the emotion.
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  • (7/3/2008 12:06:00 AM)


    its a really good poem
    ive been there im there and most likely will always be there
    and if you ever need anyone to talk to im always here for you
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  • (6/17/2008 10:34:00 AM)


    Great poem, i can feel the emotion.. Ive been there, and ive fallen, hard, but poems helped me back. great wording. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 11, 2008



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