The Great Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
The Great
IF LOVE IS A WEAKNESS,
IT IS WEAKNESS OF THE GREAT,
YOUR WORDSWERE THE KEY,
, MY MIND WASTHE GATE,
MY FEELINGS NEVER LIE,
MY HEART NEVER HATE,
WHEN NO ONE IS THERE,
IAM THE ONE WHO WILL WAIT,
YOUR JOY AND THE CHEAR,
THE SHARING AND THE CARE,
TO ME YOU CAN RELATE,
YOUR MIND AND THE SOUL,
TO ME CORRELATE,
THE LOVE AND THE HOPE,
WE ABLE TO CREATE,
LET US KEEP THE ROPE,
............................
IAM HERE NEVER LEAVE,
WAITING TILL THE DATE,
I WISH... YOU TO COME,
ON TIME AND NOT BE SO LATE,
THE KEYONLY YOURS,
DON'T CLOSE THE GATE,
MY HEART FULL OF LOVE,
MY HEART NEVER HATE...
10s..once again..ive read like 6 of your poems, and im not patronizing you, ive given you 10s 4m start to end
just read your poem..great..and that exact title fits it perfectly
Love belongs to everyone and you leave the gate open for your love mans weakness for honey+++++10 regards
‘IF LOVE IS A WEAKNESS, // IT IS WEAKNESS OF THE GREAT, …’ Excellent take off…and this weakness is magnanimous… Strong TEN [goofed..by vote box LOL! ] by heart... Ms. Nivedita UK
'MY HEART FULL OF LOVE, MY HEART NEVER HATE' Well and lithe touch. Ten must be dr. sakti 13.08.09.
Nicely written, straight from the heart; creates a picture in the reader's mind. ++10
WISH... YOU TO COME, ON TIME AND NOT BE SO LATE, THE KEY ONLY YOURS, DON'T CLOSE THE GATE, MY HEART FULL OF LOVE, MY HEART NEVER HATE..., , , , , , , ya what an imagination from poetess heart. real reflection. i loved it from bottom of my heart....10
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12/6/2025 10:18:41 PM # 1.0.0
very nice lines soft and silky like love itself cheers