Execution's List Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Execution's List

Rating: 3.4

(for whom forced me to leave that orphan) ...
(I hear an orphan's tear while covered with his fear)

ohh, , on that list
an execution for who carry hot blood of the east
there was a list carry names of Dignity, pride and who is just for the least
there was a list... they postponed till after the feast, ,
oh me who was on the list..
I was on that list...
the monsters had a mercy, execute me not on my feast...
in that list, the racists practice their racism toward the east
that list executed flower of the east by whom never equalize a beast

Almedia Knight-Oliver 16 October 2009

I love the depth and truth expressed in your work. The ' west' in my opinion, has orphaned/executed many in the North, south, east, and West-as well. Another excellent poem. a 10

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F D 16 October 2009

thank you for letting us enjoy your wisdoms in every poem you write, go on the good job, we are waiting for your news.....

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Ejaz Khan 16 October 2009

Very difficult for me to understand this write, which list you're talking about, who execute whom and why? Am I missing something, are you talking in general terms or are pointing to some particular incident? Dear Tamara, you're absolutely right, the world does suffer at the hands of vices like racism, discrimination and hatred but believe me this menace is outspread and can be found in all directions, east, west, north and south is of no importance. The words like persecution and execution bring to mind horrible memories, I hope that no one is after you and that you leave this nausty feelings behind and come back and create lovely poetry once again. I am really impressed though by your way of writing and attracting the readers, alovely write!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 October 2009

racism is a curse of this civilization! well done!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 October 2009

yet evocative by feeling of distinction, yet most ingenious studded with imagery, quite heart wrenching,10+++, thanks for sharing

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HM DeGratePoet 20 October 2011

A very very sad truth...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 April 2010

‘…the racists practice their racism toward the east…’ its partial view of racism…only east? …it’s a pandemic…and robbing peace tranquility of civilized people… Religious Ethnic Political Linguistic Bibilio Audio Visual Gender Color are just tip of iceberg … very ably written…thanks… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 28 February 2010

You know..with all the pain and hate in the world the one thing rings true for me at least; being of a darker hue..is that someone else's opinion of me is not my reality..and there is no greater love than that of God! So I say bully for those who hate and misunderstand..bully to me... as I live my purpose day by day. Sharing a purpose filed message daily of loving and well being..makes a difference of how we see the world..and I know these are heinous times but in times like these rises the best and worst in man.. choose.

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Faruzan Anwer 29 October 2009

Good idea, just needs a little clarity in terms of expression...An interesting read.

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Omar Bizri 26 October 2009

execution list wont be amended.... nice Poem Tamara :)

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