TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Execution's List

(for whom forced me to leave that orphan) ...
(I hear an orphan's tear while covered with his fear)

ohh, , on that list
an execution for who carry hot blood of the east
there was a list carry names of Dignity, pride and who is just for the least
there was a list... they postponed till after the feast, ,
oh me who was on the list..
I was on that list...
the monsters had a mercy, execute me not on my feast...
in that list, the racists practice their racism toward the east
that list executed flower of the east by whom never equalize a beast

Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 1, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 29, 2011

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Comments about Execution's List by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • HM DeGratePoet (10/20/2011 10:12:00 AM)

    A very very sad truth...

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/2/2010 1:37:00 AM)

    ‘…the racists practice their racism toward the east…’ its partial view of racism…only east? …it’s a pandemic…and robbing peace tranquility of civilized people…

    Religious Ethnic Political Linguistic Bibilio Audio Visual Gender Color are just tip of iceberg … very ably written…thanks…
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (2/28/2010 5:33:00 PM)

    You know..with all the pain and hate in the world the one thing rings true for me at least; being of a darker hue..is that someone else's opinion of me is not my reality..and there is no greater love than that of God! So I say bully for those who hate and misunderstand..bully to me... as I live my purpose day by day. Sharing a purpose filed message daily of loving and well being..makes a difference of how we see the world..and I know these are heinous times but in times like these rises the best and worst in man.. choose.

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  • Faruzan Anwer (10/29/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    Good idea, just needs a little clarity in terms of expression...An interesting read.

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  • Omar Bizri (10/26/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    execution list wont be amended....
    nice Poem Tamara :)

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  • Kristina B; Williams (10/21/2009 12:28:00 PM)

    thanks for bringing alive the country's pain..we are so wrapped up in ourselves that we 4get other worlds 10s

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  • John Hulsey (10/18/2009 7:28:00 AM)

    Strangely beautiful... I totally dig it!

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  • Deodath Debideen (10/17/2009 8:54:00 PM)

    Read it again. You have a unique style. Keep getting better!

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (10/17/2009 8:43:00 PM)

    if this is in regards to the 500 list, then i can only say.
    in this life there is a much better way.

    true to your self is what life is about
    and of this, i have no doubt.

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  • Alf Hutchison (10/17/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    hello Tamara...I am with Ejaz on this write....you have a great passion and a most interesting story to tell... you know it but you must be more clear when putting it accross ... I tell you this in love... Regards Alf

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/17/2009 2:21:00 AM)

    yet evocative by feeling of distinction, yet most ingenious studded with imagery, quite heart wrenching,10+++, thanks for sharing

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/17/2009 2:15:00 AM)

    racism is a curse of this civilization! well done!

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  • Ejaz Khan (10/16/2009 12:46:00 PM)

    Very difficult for me to understand this write, which list you're talking about, who execute whom and why? Am I missing something, are you talking in general terms or are pointing to some particular incident? Dear Tamara, you're absolutely right, the world does suffer at the hands of vices like racism, discrimination and hatred but believe me this menace is outspread and can be found in all directions,
    east, west, north and south is of no importance. The words like persecution and execution bring to mind horrible memories, I hope that no one is after you and that you leave this nausty feelings behind and come back and create lovely poetry once again. I am really impressed though by your way of writing and attracting the readers, alovely write!

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  • F D (10/16/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    thank you for letting us enjoy your wisdoms in every poem you write, go on the good job, we are waiting for your news.....

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (10/16/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    I love the depth and truth expressed in your work. The ' west' in my opinion, has orphaned/executed many in the North, south, east, and West-as well. Another excellent poem. a 10

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (10/14/2009 7:14:00 PM)

    May you be forever fattened by the fantastic feast of poetic excellence.

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  • Krish Harry (10/14/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    dunno wat 2 say....a nice 1! ! !

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  • Anju Addanki (10/14/2009 3:42:00 AM)

    After so many comments i can just say its just fantastic poem

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  • Mark NwagwuMark Nwagwu (10/14/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    Tamara, everyday is your feast and you will not be on the list for execution on any day. Every day is your feast, and no one can take that from you, racists and all. great expression of indefatigable human soirit.
    mark

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  • Surya . (10/13/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    a situation requiring every one's attention brought out in a wonderfful way.thanx for sharing, .
    voted10
    surya

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