Scarlet .....


~the Hallway Of Hell~1 - Poem by Scarlet .....

Sitting in the corner
in the hallway of hell
afraid of the door

Terrified to move her
gaze up from the floor
there is no light
not in this hallway
of which I speak

Only light I see sneaks
out from beneath
that door

Oh god she squeezes
her self tight
trying to release
such fright

Oh god she hates
these nights
door creeks open

Her heart beat
triples form such
fright
lungs tighten
gaze moves up

Blinded by the light
she squints to see
the monster of the night
hidden within the light


Comments about ~the Hallway Of Hell~1 by Scarlet .....

  • (5/10/2008 11:58:00 PM)

    Hell is where we thought it is when we are crashed by fate, but heaven is where we believe we are after those darks clouds have cleared and light comes as bliss! A 10. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/26/2008 9:42:00 PM)

    Scary as Hell to me!

    GW62
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  • Melvin Banggollay (2/12/2008 10:23:00 PM)

    Great poem and expression of imagination. thanks for sharing and best wishes.

    melvin
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  • (11/12/2007 12:31:00 AM)

    Great write hun, good 2 see your back on the writing trail

    Peace

    Soul
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  • (11/12/2007 12:03:00 AM)

    +hey there+

    another masterpiece..
    full of emotions..
    two thumbs up..
    looking forward to your new
    poem series..
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  • (11/11/2007 9:22:00 PM)

    I'd b stupid not to read the rest... this poem is amazing. (Report)Reply

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  • Alan Curtis (11/9/2007 1:22:00 PM)

    Hell yea! ! I like all of tha Hallways of Hell! ! There isnt a poem of u'rs that I dont like and this series of poems r the best n my book.


    Peace out from North Cali BaBY! ! ! ! !
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  • (11/7/2007 1:41:00 PM)

    hmm, sounds interesting, ill read on.... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2007 10:16:00 AM)

    very good much much better (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 23, 2011


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