The History Of Our Love Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

The History Of Our Love

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You were the path of my darkness fallen lonliness
By the ignited lamp of love inside me,
I travelled within her soul
Eyes absorbed eveything outside me
To present her a beautiful gift to cherish her heart.
She was beating for me every moment,
For my heart to breath
We were the free birds of this horizon
Entwined our wings together
As a single soul in wind fallen sky.
The caressed and embraced desires of our soul encircled,
With passion scented fragrance over our body.
Together we sipped the hive of candid care
Oozed from my soul to her soul
And seeped from her body to my body.
Ebb and flow of life coudn't fail the sail of our soul
My saliferous mind dissolved in her
When I tasted her sweetness of love.
Our love was as continous as the waves;
She was my shore, and I, the sea
Kissed her forehead continously without a cease.
The Sun gave us shade,
Even there were no trees in the land,
Lurked himself under the clouds.
Rainbow trembled by the thunderous clouds
When he saw the colour of our love,
Wanted to add more colour on his bow,
But he could not succeed
because his colour was eternal like our love.
We were like the same image in the mirror
When our thirst of love was same for both.
You were the skylark of my songs.
And I was your cupid musician,
Together we could compose a song of love
And when rain fermented the shore,
Smell of sand evoked mesial merry in our body
Together we danced in the spume over the sand.
Natural photographer framed our photo at times,
On the surface of our own soul.
We sat on a dewy white soggy flower at midnight,
And cuddled the soft petals of our pollens in a fine tuned cymbal.
When moonlight cursed the lotus,
Stars masked their faces as it the Moon did.
We were not querulous like the thunder of clouds,
And we never cried like the unremitting rain for any reason.
What was the hotness of our love?
Was it like the Sunlight?
What was the coolness of our love?
Was it like the Moonlight?
Who was the messenger of our love?
Was it the breeze?
Everything like the Sun and the Moon,
Rain and Rainbow,
Wind and Wave surprised us.
But we too surprised them by our love
They became jealous on the beauty of our love,
But who can be jealous on their existence.
But the eyes of fate attired its sullen silk on our lovable body.
They too became jealous on the purity of our love.
But, We never soiled the sphere.
We preserved the purity of both love an nature.
And the history of our love,
Sleep in the Nature's tomb today.

Sunday, August 28, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: history
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

This is lovely, lively fantastic song sung for our fellow poet Vipins. With each poem of his, he creeping towards the list of best poets of 21 century, if my observation is not wrong! Thank for sharing your poem with us, a, ye- a noble poet!

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Stefanie Fontker 05 September 2011

This is very long, but you were able to keep my attention the entire poem. Great writing.

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Hans Vr 29 August 2011

This poems brings the reader to feel the supreme heights of your love. It is very well written; the images of nature are very well harmonizing with the feelings described. High level poetry. Very well done.

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

History of love in allegorical representations of imageries, sweet alliterations and very wonderfully woven fine cut poetry.Great write..

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