Fox Nekitsune

in Richmond Yorkshire
Fox Nekitsune
in Richmond Yorkshire
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The Hunter

Rating: 3.8
Dew wets the grass
I am the hunter
I walk a deadly path
I am hunting

Slipping through the trees
I am the hunter
I do it all with ease
I am hunting

There stood before me
Is the prey that I desire
A tremble running through me
Now I feel the hunters fire

I circle closer
Keeping her in sight
I circle closer
Don’t want to give her a fright

Now im behind her
So close now
I smell beautiful fur
So close now

Quickly I move
Tearing at her for what I want
Quickly I move
Now I will haunt her

I take my fill
I am the hunter
I leave her still
I have hunted
Kim Barney 22 November 2014
Very nice poem. TEARING AT HER FOR WHAT I WANT makes an abrupt change in my thinking. Up to that point I thought of the hunter as being human, but then it seems the hunter is another animal, such as a cougar. I really enjoyed this.
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Brian Jani 05 June 2014
What an amazing poem
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Jaya Varma 23 November 2013
awesome poem..really..a classic with simplicity..
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Jayne Davies 22 November 2013
A good write! Well done
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Babatunde Aremu 22 January 2013
This poem reads the mind of a hunter in the jungle. We are all hunters one way or the other. Life is about hunting. Great write. I like your simple style
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Rodney Vali 18 January 2013
When reading this, I feel the story, I become the hunter. Great piece of writing!
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Gajanan Mishra 08 January 2013
Again I smell beautiful fur so close now. thanks.
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Soulful Heart 01 January 2013
the hunter and the hunted one have done well with words..................: -)
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Kenny Nelson 26 December 2012
Very descriptive, I liked it!
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Emmanuel Ogundeji 17 December 2012
gr8 poem it gave a vivid imagination of the story
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