Romantic Poems: 56 / 500

Another Version Of Me

Rating: 4.5

I love my
craziness
I'm strong when
I'm alone
I feel too
much emotions
I want to
be totally free
to do what
I have in
mind
I adore doing
the same things
everyday
I'm friendless and
armless
I'm strenghtless when
I write and
read a lot
I want so
many things that
I try to
change myself uselessly
I'm exhausted to
be perpetually undecided
I'm an obsessed
dreamer
I don't wanna
make experience because
I feel bad
and awkward
It's not in
my personality to
have charisma, a
strong will and
ambitions
I need something
romantic like sweet
kisses and delicate
caresses
I'm wrong for
this world and
sometimes I'm intimidated
by what
Sometimes I fear
too much of
the darkness and
of my shadow
I want to
cook for my
future family

Tuesday, March 29, 2016
Romantic Poems: 56 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: me,myself
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

I'm wrong for this world and sometimes I'm intimidated by what Sometimes I fear too much of the darkness Nicely written poem. Thanks and congrats.

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Babatunde Aremu 22 September 2017

There is a psychological war within this personality. a little counselling will do

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Lyn Paul 22 September 2017

Such a suited title. I also love how you know exactly what you want and what you fear. We express our words best when we are alone. So important to not be afraid to be ones self. For many people are. Thank You

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Dear Laura 22 September 2018

Your poem isstrong and insightful.

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2017

I'm strenghtless when...strengthless? this feels like a long string of raw data pouring out of you; interesting indeed. bri :)

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A B Faniki 05 October 2019

A well cafted piece with a touch of darkness. Thanks for sharing such vivid imagery. Great write

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Rajnish Manga 23 September 2019

It's not in / my personality to have charisma, a / strong will and ambitions / I need something... romantic like sweet / kisses and delicate / caresses.... //.... It is not always possible to get what we want but be positive and make sincere effort to make your dreams come true. Thanks & Congrats.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 September 2019

A soliloquy of a common women narrating her strengths and weaknesses as also her demands from life. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Amir Marandi 22 September 2019

Honest feelings pouring out of this brilliant and intriguing.poem. " Sometimes I fear too much of the darkness and of my shadow." ...... The negative vibrations of this uncertain existence? Congrats for POD.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 September 2019

Very impressing BIO of a poetess. Confessional poem her way. I cite her words here: I want to be totally free to do what I have in mind.........................................That´s what she has not, but wished to do, just like that TOTALLY FREE. to DO what she has in mind........Excellent poem, a well deserved Member Poem Of The Day, CONGRATS Laura! A 10

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