Per. Nig.


The Inner Beauty - Poem by Per. Nig.

In every star
A cute sunflower lives
We can't see her
Except the light she gives

The hidden oasis
In every desert
Voice of water
Classical concert

Your radiant smile
Form of flower
The inner beauty
Love's power

(2008/5/31)


Comments about The Inner Beauty by Per. Nig.

  • (11/14/2008 1:42:00 AM)

    This is luvly. I'm amazed don't know what to say but give you a 10. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/10/2008 6:55:00 PM)

    ANOTHER BEAUTY. YOUR THOUGHTS/IMPRESSION ARE MINE AND MINE YOURS. I CALL SMILES AND HUGS MEDICINES. FOR THOSE LUCKY ENOUGH TO MEET PEOPLE WHOSE EYES SHINE FIRST BEFORE THEIR LIPS, WELL, WE ARE BEING TREATED TO A TRUE CONNECTION AND COMPLETION OF OURSELVES AND THEM. PURE MAGIC. CAROL (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2008 4:12:00 AM)

    Nightingale, beautiful and surprising poems, you fantastically whistle my friend... 10...
    Tsira
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  • (6/11/2008 11:10:00 PM)

    And flowers of beauty rose above the reeds:
    the winds of change scattering their seeds.
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  • (6/9/2008 11:22:00 AM)

    Awwww, is a very pretty poem! ! ! It really speaks to me. Bravo, my nightingale! (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (6/7/2008 12:16:00 AM)

    This poem is a star la sunflower…beautiful imaginative and thought provoking.
    One of the best among poems I read in ph recently. Congrats Shiraz! *10*
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  • (6/4/2008 7:46:00 AM)

    a graceful poem! i like it (Report)Reply

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  • (6/4/2008 2:13:00 AM)

    in every star a beautiful sunflower, my favorite flower, nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2008 3:38:00 PM)

    Persian my friend, you never fail to amaze...you open every-ones eyes to such beautiful things.....you're a great poet...'10'


    best wishes
    Jon
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  • (6/2/2008 8:31:00 AM)

    Great poem...this is defenetly one of your bests. (Report)Reply

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  • Sadiqullah Khan (6/2/2008 2:49:00 AM)

    the inner beauty, loves power, , , great lines (Report)Reply

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  • (6/1/2008 7:54:00 AM)

    Very elegant phrases and thoughts of an incredible finesse. Thanks Nightingale. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2008 1:26:00 PM)

    This is lovely, looks may fade but inner beauty stays, a well written piece, thanks.
    *10*
    Lynda xxx
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  • (5/31/2008 12:49:00 PM)

    Loves light shines bright from deep within, the inner beauty beneath the skin! *10*! ! !
    Best regards, a great read!
    Friend Thad
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  • (5/31/2008 6:07:00 AM)

    such a sweet small poem with such a huge message...fantastic (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2008 5:58:00 AM)

    its so sweet, very beautiful poem. In my favourites :) thank you for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2008 5:56:00 AM)

    You romantic, you! Perfectly composed and memorable. t x (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2008 5:42:00 AM)

    Radiance of the inner part can be felt and unveiled in every being. Your words showed it very beautifully for those who want to see. A very lovely poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 31, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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