The Journey - 03 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Journey - 03

Rating: 5.0


I got
My first realization, -
This one is a sweet world,
Sweet andsoft,
Soft and warm,
Warm and sweet.
And the sweet world
Centres around only one body
That is this,
My mother.

Wednesday, June 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,love and life,mother,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 27 October 2017

got My first realization, - This one is a sweet world, Sweet and soft, Soft and warm, Warm and sweet. And the sweet world Centres around only one body That is this, My mother.it was a lovely poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Raj for such inspiring words.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 18 June 2016

I got My first realization, - This one is a sweet world, Sweet and soft, Soft and warm, Warm and sweet. And the sweet world Centres around only one body That is this, My mother. Nicely written. Beautiful poem on the cosy lap of a mother for a baby. 10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Sanjukta mam for such inspiring words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 June 2016

I got My first realization, - This one is a sweet world, Sweet and soft, Soft and warm, Warm and sweet. beautiful poem written with so nice style. thanks for the poem.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear poet mam for such inspiring words.

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Sabita Sahoo 18 June 2016

Sweet and soft, Soft and warm, Warm and sweet. And the sweet world Centres around only one body That is this, My mother. Nice poem with beautiful expression, Thanks for sharing the poem.10 marks for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear poet Sabita mam for such inspiring words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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