The Journey - 04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Journey - 04

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I felt an urge-
Within me,
To touch her,
To interact with her
Through my shivering lips.

The curtains between us
Were removed.
No more hindrances,
None between us-
Me and my mom,
My mom and me,
A heap of warmth,
A lump of softness,
A touch of love
Culminated into
A flux of nectar
Into my existence,
A stream of love,
Care, comfort and relaxation
Tethered into me
Through my oral cavity.

The most thrilling experience
Began instantly
With this nectar,
My mother's milk.

Wednesday, June 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,journey,love and life,mother,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

To touch her! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear revered poet for such inspiring words.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 June 2016

No more hindrances, None between us- Me and my mom, My mom and me, A heap of warmth, A lump of softness, A touch of love Culminated into A flux of nectar Into my existence, Beautiful description of milk feeding of a baby by the mother. Nice poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Anita for such inspiring words.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 18 June 2016

Me and my mom, My mom and me, A heap of warmth, A lump of softness, A touch of love Culminated into A flux of nectar Into my existence, A stream of love, Care, comfort and relaxation Tethered into me Through my oral cavity. Great poem on mother and the birth of a baby. Thanks poet.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you Sanjukta dear for such inspiring words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 June 2016

The curtains between us Were removed. No more hindrances, None between us- Me and my mom, My mom and me, A heap of warmth, A lump of softness, A touch of love Culminated into A flux of nectar thanks for the nice poem.. Beautiful. well written. 10 marks for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear mam Rini for such inspiring words.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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