The Journey - 02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Journey - 02

Rating: 5.0


The journey
Did not end here up,
After I was born.

Someone carried me
Back to my source -
My mother, the one
With the softest grip.
I was destined
To a new and
Thrilling experience.

She drew me closer -
closer to my heart
Were her bosoms-
The home of sweetness and
The sweetest nectar.
I felt a comforting warmth,
I needed most.
It made me happy.
It made me relaxed.
I felt safe.
A sphere of caring comfort
Encircled me and
Engulfed around.

What a bliss!
What a pleasure! !
I felt home.

Wednesday, June 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,love and life,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2016

Someone carried me! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Sir for such inspiring words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2016

What a bliss! What a pleasure! ! I felt home. Beautiful poem. The more one reads it, the more pleasure it gives. Thanks poet for the sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Rini mam for such inspiring words.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 18 June 2016

closer to my heart Were her bosoms- The home of sweetness and The sweetest nectar. I felt a comforting warmth, I needed most. It made me happy. It made me relaxed. I felt safe. Beautiful poem. Nice writing on mother's care. Thanks for sharing.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Sanjukta for such inspiring words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 June 2016

My mother, the one With the softest grip. I was destined To a new and Thrilling experience. She drew me closer - closer to my heart Were her bosoms- The home of sweetness and The sweetest nectar. beautiful work.very nicely written. 10+ for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Yes, Thank you dear poet for such inspiring words.

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Sabita Sahoo 18 June 2016

It made me happy. It made me relaxed. I felt safe. A sphere of caring comfort Encircled me and Engulfed around. What a bliss! What a pleasure! ! I felt home A great poem describing mother's comforting closeness. Thanks for the poem. 10 marks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Wow, Thank you dear poet for such inspiring words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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