The Last Can [ Of ] To[mato] [ Soup ] … [ Inspired By Lora Colon's 'the Last Canto'; Mom And Sick Child; 'the Old Days'; It Is Mostly True; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

The Last Can [ Of ] To[mato] [ Soup ] … [ Inspired By Lora Colon's 'the Last Canto'; Mom And Sick Child; 'the Old Days'; It Is Mostly True; Short]



When I was a kid and got a cold, my mom kept me ……secure.
She put me to bed, and gave me buttered toast and soup ….to cure.
And ginger ale, Canada Dry I suppose. Only the ‘best' for Bri!
[It didn't suffice when pneumonia I got (twice) : I wonder: ….'Why? ']

In 'those days', nearly 60 years ago, our doctor DID make house calls.
[‘Twas nice for Mom and me to NOT have to leave our home's walls, but, ....
NOW, to get a Dr. to come to your home may 'cost you' one of your 'balls' …
OR ovaries! ! ]

Back then I mostly just got colds. None of my bones did I ever …..break.
But I easily could have, since I climbed trees a LOT, …..for Goodness Sake!

My mom is gone now. Things aren't the same. My mate ‘swears by' echinacea.
'It' prevents and/or cures colds! ! She may even recommend for …..amnesia! ! !
No ginger ale enters this house. In fact, No soda pop; 'mate' MIGHT call it 'poop'.
Yes, it was my 'Dear Mom' who, FOR ME, opened the 'Last Can Of Tomato Soup'.

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(December 23, 2016)

Friday, December 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: illness,mother and child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
amnesia? probably my mate would NOT say that. otherwise the 'story' is true. our doctor did NOT come to us much. usually we had to go to him, as we do these days, UNLESS we have LOTS of money!

Thanks to Lora Colon.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 14 January 2017

Tomato soup- -awesome! Moms- -even better. No broken bones....to be envied. The pneumonia part just doesn't sound good at all. This is one great canto, Bri (can't say a thing about the echinacea) .

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