The Last With Lust... Poem by hazem al jaber

here i am your panel which you seeks for... waiting your touches... waiting your colors... needing you as paintbrush... to draw me through your fires.. and to fire each others.. Rachel Ann Butler

' The Last With Lust'... you painted a beautiful picture of striking images and colored emotions. A masterful job, a 10+++

oh you know how this makes me feel great job write more

Poem, have maximum of emotion. Desire, passion and love, are starting imagination which is creating pictures causing shiver... for sensitive persons. It is feel, in every word. The author certainly gave a lot of heart and own emotions, what the poem became real. I like it very much it. (10v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

very sensitive and romantic, the punctuations made it more sensual do give feedback on my poems as well :)

Your have a fine poetic voice with a penchant for the ladies. A masterpiece of a poem - fiery and passionate. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

you have deep passion in your heart...I like your poem... :)

wow, i love this poem... so romantic... so nice.. keep it up

Nice.very nice...! ! !

your poem is really more than wonderfull..... I like it... keep writing.. cauze i felt that I am the one who are talking not you It's really more than wonderfull THANK U for your comments :)