hazem al jaber

The Last With Lust...

The last with lust...







between your arms...

here i am...

as a great panel...

drew by a great artist...


in front of your eyes...

here i am...

as boat without drone...

has no leader to ride...
lay away your imaginations...

threw your paintbrush away...

here i am your panel which you seeks for...

waiting your touches...

waiting your colors...

needing you as paintbrush...

to draw me through your fires..

and to fire each others..



let me lie down peacefully into your lap...

pillow my head on your chest...

to throw all worries back...

with a happiness taking a nap while you hugging me...

get me more close to you...

let me lose myself through your hot breathes...

and your exciting whispers...

to give me all colors of love...



here i am your panel...

give me your hot colors...

give me, my happiness through your great appetite...

draw me with your lips...

with your hot naked body fire me...

with no stop..

with no mercy...

to the last with lust...



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 15, 2009

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  • Alison Cassidy (9/27/2009 7:42:00 PM)

    Your have a fine poetic voice with a penchant for the ladies. A masterpiece of a poem - fiery and passionate.
    Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (9/21/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    you have deep passion in your heart...I like your poem... :)

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  • Lovita Lara (9/21/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    wow, i love this poem...
    so romantic... so nice..
    keep it up

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  • Mahsa Mahdavi (9/19/2009 5:02:00 AM)

    Nice.very nice...! ! !

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  • The Lost.. (9/19/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    your poem is really more than wonderfull..... I like it...
    keep writing..
    cauze i felt that I am the one who are talking not you
    It's really more than wonderfull
    THANK U for your comments :)

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  • Rachel Butler (9/19/2009 4:31:00 AM)

    here i am your panel which you seeks for...
    waiting your touches...
    waiting your colors...
    needing you as paintbrush...
    to draw me through your fires..
    and to fire each others..

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/17/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    ' The Last With Lust'... you painted a beautiful picture of striking images and colored emotions. A masterful job, a 10+++

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  • Jackie Mcgee (9/16/2009 12:28:00 PM)

    oh you know how this makes me feel great job write more

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  • Maria Barbara Korynt (9/16/2009 7:44:00 AM)

    Poem, have maximum of emotion. Desire, passion and love, are starting imagination which is creating pictures causing shiver... for sensitive persons. It is feel, in every word. The author certainly gave a lot of heart and own emotions, what the poem became real. I like it very much it. (10v.) Greetings. :)
    Maria Barbara Korynt

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  • D.D Sherman (9/16/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    very sensitive and romantic, the punctuations made it more sensual
    do give feedback on my poems as well :)

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  • Mimi Brown (9/16/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    Very nice poem, I would change one word, please.. The word panel has many definitions.
    Try using canvas, as in artist's canvas. I feel it would lend to the poem's flow. Thank you for allowing me to read your poem. Regards, Mimi

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (9/16/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    I thuoght this was a lovely poem.

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  • Black & White Right (9/16/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    did you check out my subconscience while writing this?
    Poets.....
    you are so dangerous!

    lyrically romantic

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  • Lady Grace (9/16/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    uhum...nice ha...romantic as ever...

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  • Tamara - Hanaring (9/16/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    a wonderful warm poem, well said

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  • Catrina Heart (9/15/2009 10:52:00 AM)

    lovely poem, you have dragged me with your soothing words and phrases..........Thanks!

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  • Joseph Poewhit (9/15/2009 5:40:00 AM)

    Woman have a way of molding men

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