The Mighty Sea Poem by Sanjana Kottapalli

The Mighty Sea

Rating: 4.5


What a magnificent beauty she is,
Mother of thousands of creatures she is! !
Loved by many, but only loves the moon,
Raising it's tides to meet it soon! !
Up and down goes it's flow with cool breeze,
I wonder how the tiny creatures don't freeze! !
Only if I could see the tiny kingdoms built by little ones,
And see the beauty of their world by being one among them! !
Might is her flow, mightier are her creatures! !

Monday, November 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,mighty,moon,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Narendar Babu 06 November 2017

Wonderful thought of bring the secret hidden in the mighty Seas/oceans to light. Great work!

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Uday Dakoju 06 November 2017

The Sea is not only Mother but the Saga of the universe for all living beings of the worlds known or unknown. Very well portrayed the greatness of the Sea. Keep it up dear.

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Evelyn Norcott 06 November 2017

Wow! ! Thank you for sharing this Sanjana. I love this poem, it stirs a sort of child-like magic in me! Please keep writing! (I added this to MyPoemList, as I'd hate to lose it! !) - EN x

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Krishna Priya Kottapalli 06 November 2017

Excellent

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2017

A magnificent piece of work! The great sea is superbly described. Rich poetic imagination..10

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Minathi Patro 22 February 2018

Very nice poem sanju ..good start ..☺

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Sanjana. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Raga Priya 18 November 2017

Very well narrated dear.... excellent....

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 13 November 2017

Nice cartoonic imagination. Yes wish we could really be one amongst them. Keep up

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Chinedu Dike 11 November 2017

An insightful depiction of the sea awesomeness, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Lovely poem written in good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Sanjana.

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