The Mirror Poem by Elliott Rosenberg

The Mirror

Rating: 4.8


The Mirror
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I smiled in the mirror this morning,
She gestured back with grace,
Aged with freckled chrome,
She is my confidant and friend.

She speaks of mothers adages,
Silver haired and plumed,
Carded of fine porcelain forged of brittle bone.

As any old crone wrinkled well,
Dowered with provincial adverbs,
She sheds light of ages past,
Notorious of disbelief.

This morning is different,
For the musk of morning dew,
Speaks plenitude in this confessional,
Free of reigns and solitude.

Monday, May 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confessional,solitude,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem for Sarae the Dancer from New Hampshire March 27th,2015 on a flight from Managua to Miami. Her lifting silence spoke to me. (su silencio ascendente me hablo)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 17 October 2020

The rich world of the mirrored image very well felt and portrayed. Impeccably written!

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Howard Savage 30 December 2015

A beautiful Expression. Embracing who you are is an indication of strength.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 15 May 2015

I too feel and see the 'imagery' you have depicted to well in this poem. Very nice. Isn't it amazing how silence can speak volumes. 'The Mirror' is often a reflection. A reflection seen from someone else we deeply feel within ourselves. To notice 'immediately'. Without a word needing to be spoken or heard. We 'see' to believe and accept.

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Kelly Kurt 04 May 2015

I agree with Paul. Nicely written. Enjoyable read. Peace

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Paul Brookes 04 May 2015

great imagery in this well written poem really speaks to the reader or is that a reflection. Great read Good write Thanks BB

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