The Mole Poem by Donna Caldwell

The Mole

Rating: 5.0


The blackness grew surrounding her mole
It grew in a cluster and looked like coal
Under her skin it just grew and grew
A mass of cells raging and very new

The mole on her skin was a part of her past
Like a tattoo at birth it was therefore cast
Lain on her skin it was only slight
Plus a few more were created from a great might

He gave her moles and He gave her skin
He gave her a material body to replenish in
He gave us the sun and also the sky
Use this wisely He would say with a sigh

Fierce sunshine surrounded her frame
It coursed through her body and created a chain
A chain so deadly it would flood her internal
Threatening her existence eternal

Clinging to each cell was a deadly force
From the pits of hell it would make it much worse
From the sun and this deadly machine
A life sentence for you from their deadly beam

No need to be vain you need to live
He gave you this life he wanted to give
Go check that mole and fight all you can
Remove those thoughts that you need a tan

A tanned daughter, sister or mother
You didn’t listen you did not cover
Now you’ve got cancer and I’m going to lose you
Those additional memories will now be a few

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 June 2013

your message makes up for what i consider some deficiencies in the poetry. perhaps cutting out the rhyming would allow readers to concentrate more on your message; some of the rhymes (a few) are distracting anyway. but thanks for sharing AND i highly recommend your poem MALE CHAUVINIST PIG.....maybe even to a few pigs! oink. oink. i'll add you to my favoritepoets list.

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

The melanoma.....hmm........................ beautiful piece of writing unmatchable

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Dave Walker 09 November 2011

Wow, a warning to everyone. A amazing poem. An heart felt poem.

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