You Don't Belong Poem by Donna Caldwell
You Don't Belong
That dress you're wearing doesn't suit you
And I really don't like your new hair do
You've lost too much weight and your skin is pale
And that exam you have taken is sure to fail
I'm glad that I'm not you!
I'm not surprised your date didn't show
He liked me better I'll have you know!
I'd hate to be boring and very plain
And it cannot keep you very sane
When you have nowhere to go!
Your nose is horrid and very long
And the make-up you buy is always wrong
Your complexion never looks right
In fact with make-up it looks quite a sight
I'd hate to not belong!
Different theme...I think you are expressing your opinion to someone.....
I guess I'm a different sort, I read, then re-read this and doing like I usually do.... I read Between the lines, I think Donna, that you wrote this about yourself... others must have made these comments about you? Maybe have been made throught your life, people can be way too critical and cruel... I don't think that you would ever think this about others... showing us all how words can hurt... but then I digress... that's just me.; -) I like this. I think it; s a crackerjack of a write! ; -) -Kelly.
It's just attacking. So proud! Maybe so cruel. Come on. Be light-hearted. I didn't like this.
Wow! I love to see both of you in a ring for the match of the century! A typical talking of teenager girls competing for the same man! 10+++ It brought a smile to my weary face at least! Well done! Thank you for sharing Donna! Your writing skills are very impressive! God Bless You! Stay out of troubles! Romeo from New York City!
OUCH...! :) hey that is unfair.....its insider information.....lolz very nice.... grin!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 7:20:24 AM # 1.0.0.1119
very nice and a lot is told about your taste in a sweet way.liked it.