The moment I saw you
I could barely contain
All the butterflies jumping
It's hard to explain.
My coolest persona
Just melted away
And my words came out jumbled
I forgot what to say.
I felt rather foolish
And thought you would leave
But the smile you then gave me
I still can't believe.
The first time I saw you
You blew me away
But your smile still disarms me
When I see you each day.
(October 2008)
Such smiles are like ‘Smile n’ Profile’ …profound imagination…of Love... TEN Ms. Nivedita UK
I think that this is very good, love the way it flowed and is to the point...
Love this absolutely delightfully romantic love poem Charles, it is that first time that truly blows us away or not, and the smile still so disarming? Sounds like you got it bad! smiling at you Tai
My coolest persona Just melted away And my words came out jumbled I forgot what to say.- - - - - - - -those words melt a woman's heart quicker than the smoothest lines
Beautiful flow of thoughts ceremoniously rich in tone. An absolutely pleasing piece. Thanks for sharing Charles.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
breath takin and beautiful to read or listen to as one reads it to you