....The Moment I Saw You (Best Love Poems) Poem by Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems)

....The Moment I Saw You (Best Love Poems)

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The moment I saw you
I could barely contain
All the butterflies jumping
It's hard to explain.

My coolest persona
Just melted away
And my words came out jumbled
I forgot what to say.

I felt rather foolish
And thought you would leave
But the smile you then gave me
I still can't believe.

The first time I saw you
You blew me away
But your smile still disarms me
When I see you each day.

(October 2008)

Saturday, October 25, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: first love,love,smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Calvin Nyth 23 December 2011

breath takin and beautiful to read or listen to as one reads it to you

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G.G Gon 05 February 2012

WOW! ! thats pretty good. You did a grate job.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 December 2009

Such smiles are like ‘Smile n’ Profile’ …profound imagination…of Love... TEN Ms. Nivedita UK

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Saint Cynosure 25 October 2008

I think that this is very good, love the way it flowed and is to the point...

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Tai Chi Italy 25 October 2008

Love this absolutely delightfully romantic love poem Charles, it is that first time that truly blows us away or not, and the smile still so disarming? Sounds like you got it bad! smiling at you Tai

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Susan Williams 16 September 2020

My coolest persona Just melted away And my words came out jumbled I forgot what to say.- - - - - - - -those words melt a woman's heart quicker than the smoothest lines

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? ? ? ? ? 14 May 2019

Awe so cute and beautiful

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Beautiful flow of thoughts ceremoniously rich in tone. An absolutely pleasing piece. Thanks for sharing Charles.

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Tom Navarro 14 June 2015

But your smile still disarms me - best recipe for love!

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Meena Mustafa 01 July 2012

Wow! Wow! Wow! beautiful poem

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